This day has been surreal.
I feel like a part of me
walks among the dead.
And because their waters
aren’t troubled
my sadness is out of place.
Kiana Davis 2013
Surreal
Published by Poet Kiana Davis
Kiana Davis was born and raised in Richmond, California. She began writing poetry at the age of 12 to grapple with growing up in a low income community and to help her develop her identity as a young black girl in America. For the past 10 years, she has worked as an educator teaching at-risk youth in Washington State. View more posts
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Did you mean
I feel like a part of me [apart is an adverb].
walks among the dead.
Enjoying your poetry!
Yes, thank you. I appreciate the feedback.
thank you for the edit. you are right! I will update soon!!
Thank you for reading!!!
=) Thanks for the support as well.
No problem!!