This day has been surreal.
I feel like a part of me
walks among the dead.
And because their waters
aren’t troubled
my sadness is out of place.
Kiana Davis 2013
6 responses to “Surreal”
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Did you mean
I feel like a part of me [apart is an adverb].
walks among the dead.
Enjoying your poetry!
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Yes, thank you. I appreciate the feedback.
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thank you for the edit. you are right! I will update soon!!
Thank you for reading!!!-
=) Thanks for the support as well.
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No problem!!
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